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An angel living under an alias on earth, must judge humanity, a choice that may damn his daughter to eternal death.
Besides the obvious?theological flaws, (Which I doubt Hollywood would have a problem with) I think the main problem is, the story seems to be about, what the lead character must do to save his daughter after he is assigned the job of judging humanity. In other words, your logline seems to be all setRead more
Besides the obvious?theological flaws, (Which I doubt Hollywood would have a problem with) I think the main problem is, the story seems to be about, what the lead character must do to save his daughter after he is assigned the job of judging humanity.
In other words, your logline seems to be all set-up. You describe the situation but don’t tell us what the lead plans to do about it.
See lessA Psychic P.I. must enter his own mind to regain control of his body, before a vindictive former client who?s infecting his consciousness finds and kills his sister.
In theory, this is a great premise. a serial killer who enters other peoples minds, forcing them to kill, thus there is no evidence that points to him being the killer. Perhaps the psychic PI is hired to investigate one of the deaths. Even though the murder is an open and shut case, his client is suRead more
In theory, this is a great premise. a serial killer who enters other peoples minds, forcing them to kill, thus there is no evidence that points to him being the killer.
Perhaps the psychic PI is hired to investigate one of the deaths. Even though the murder is an open and shut case, his client is sure the person who committed the crime is innocent.
Now the PI gets to close and begins to realize what is going on, so the killer turns his/her attention to the lead character.
The killer will take over the PI’s mind and force the lead character to kill his sister. In doing so he will discredit the PI who is getting too close.
Now it is a battle of wills. The Psychic PI vs the Psychic killer, as they battle for control of the PI’s body.
I think this is a solid premise.
See lessA conspiracy theorist peddling shock jockey discovers his bosses are actually aliens using him to discredit their existence before they invade, now he must expose the truth… if anyone will believe him.
"When he discovers that the owner of his radio station is an alien bent on world?domination, a disgraced conspiracy theorist must convince his audience he is telling the truth, before the earth is enslaved by extraterrestrials."
“When he discovers that the owner of his radio station is an alien bent on world?domination, a disgraced conspiracy theorist must convince his audience he is telling the truth, before the earth is enslaved by extraterrestrials.”
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