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After a bionic test leaves an island unresponsive, a company investigator and his friends come to see that the test have become weaponized automatically and cannot leave the island or it will destroy the planet.
"When a mercenary agency discovers a new form of bionics that will turn their people into supersoldiers, an undercover investigator must infiltrate their island and steal the technology before they use their uber army to take over the world."
“When a mercenary agency discovers a new form of bionics that will turn their people into supersoldiers, an undercover investigator must infiltrate their island and steal the technology before they use their uber army to take over the world.”
See lessAfter a bionic test leaves an island unresponsive, a company investigator and his friends come to see that the test have become weaponized automatically and cannot leave the island or it will destroy the planet.
1: You should probably change the word 'pending' I don't think the?word works in this context,? at least I have never heard of a person being described as a pending investigator.2: You say he is investigating "an island that is working on a new form of bionics." But you don't tell us how that is a tRead more
1: You should probably change the word ‘pending’ I don’t think the?word works in this context,? at least I have never heard of a person being described as a pending investigator.
2: You say he is investigating “an island that is working on a new form of bionics.” But you don’t tell us how that is a threat. Nor do you tell us how that could be harmful. (Plus it should be a specific person or corporation that is working on the bionics, not the island)
3: Yous say, “He realizes that the real threat is still on the island…” But that is a good thing because he is on the island. That is where he is investigating. This turn of events helps the investigation.
Anyway, good luck with this, the concept seems interesting.
See lessWhen a new long range torpedo is fired and goes missing, a submarine commander must find the torpedo before it finds a target and starts a war.
We, as readers might need just a little more information on this one.How does a torpedo 'go rogue' ???Does the torpedo have an AI brain that has gone bad? And if the torpedo's A.I. brain has gone bad, does the Torpedo have its own personality, can it be reasoned with?Is it like the 'bomb' at the endRead more
We, as readers might need just a little more information on this one.
How does a torpedo ‘go rogue’ ???
Does the torpedo have an AI brain that has gone bad? And if the torpedo’s A.I. brain has gone bad, does the Torpedo have its own personality, can it be reasoned with?
Is it like the ‘bomb’ at the end of the movie “Dark Star”, that the lead character must negotiate with when it wants to fulfill?its purpose and explode?
Just curious because the story of a torpedo ‘gone rogue’ sounds interesting but it definitely?might need a few words of explanation.
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