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A man wants to date a woman. However, a bad couple takes away their paintings of Santa Claus displayed in a park, causing conflict and misunderstanding between the man and the woman.
I am not sure who the two who like each other is, is it the couple whose painting is stolen, or are one of the characters from the original couple and one of the characters from the 'bad couple' friends and this incident causes trouble between them? The wording is just a little unclear but the overaRead more
I am not sure who the two who like each other is, is it the couple whose painting is stolen, or are one of the characters from the original couple and one of the characters from the ‘bad couple’ friends and this incident causes trouble between them?
The wording is just a little unclear but the overall idea does get through.
See lessSo more along the lines of a minor tweak to the logline, not a major overhaul.
[English] In a seemingly normal world, one of the best university students finds her world turns bloody and her mind begins to wander as she discovers who she and her father are, who took her life apart.
Things are happening to your lead character, but what does the lead character actually want, what is the lead character's goal?
Things are happening to your lead character, but what does the lead character actually want, what is the lead character’s goal?
See lessAfter her daughter dies unexpectedly, a toy maker decides to turn her into a robot doll that becomes a serial killer.
This concept might be a little too close to Childs Play (Chucky) Chucky used magic, and you use robotics, but both are just ways to get past the first 10 pages and into the story about a rampaging serial killer doll. That doesn't mean this can't work, it just needs that one extra thing to set the stRead more
This concept might be a little too close to Childs Play (Chucky)
Chucky used magic, and you use robotics, but both are just ways to get past the first 10 pages and into the story about a rampaging serial killer doll.
That doesn’t mean this can’t work, it just needs that one extra thing to set the story apart. like for instance perhaps the doll is actually protecting the father from something.
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