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Discovering she was only hired to fill a quota, a family-oriented mother bands with other ?tokens? to prove her unappreciative boss wrong by winning a big contract for the firm.
I like the premise, sort of a modern take on 9-5As for the logline, I wouldn't make any big changes.Possibly something like this: "Discovering she was hired to fill a quota, a family-oriented mother bands with other ''tokens" to prove her unappreciative boss wrong? by winning the next big contract fRead more
I like the premise, sort of a modern take on 9-5
As for the logline, I wouldn’t make any big changes.
Possibly something like this: “Discovering she was hired to fill a quota, a family-oriented mother bands with other ”tokens” to prove her unappreciative boss wrong? by winning the next big contract for the firm.”
But if you like your logline better, just stick with it, it gives the facts and sets up an interesting premise.
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