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When his unknown opponent suffers a brain haemorrhage in the ring at a local tournament, a rookie fighter must discover the boxer’s identity and find his family to gift his prize money to them.
I like the premise, I think this could make a good road movie.Your lead needs a partner, someone to go on the road with him.?
I like the premise, I think this could make a good road movie.
Your lead needs a partner, someone to go on the road with him.?
See lessJulia a high school girl, learns that her younger sister has a bowel syndrome disorder and should undergo surgery as soon as possible. She decides to go to Texas with her two friends. But in their road trip, they get involved in some adventures.
If the 'she' in the second half of the logline is the girl who's younger sister is going into surgery, then you can drop the whole first part of the logline. If the 'she' in the second half of the logline is the girl who is having surgery, then she is the lead character and the entire logline shouldRead more
If the ‘she’ in the second half of the logline is the girl who’s younger sister is going into surgery, then you can drop the whole first part of the logline.
If the ‘she’ in the second half of the logline is the girl who is having surgery, then she is the lead character and the entire logline should be written from her perspective.
See lessA jailed former wrestler, gets another chance in the spotlight by putting on wrestling shows in prison, but after his early parole, he struggles to cope without it.
After reading this logline a few more times, I am not sure if you have a logline problem, or a story problem If this isn't written yet, I would keep the story self-contained within the prison. I would create a bad guy, perhaps a guard The lead does such a good job with morale, he might be given earlRead more
After reading this logline a few more times, I am not sure if you have a logline problem, or a story problem
If this isn’t written yet, I would keep the story self-contained within the prison.
I would create a bad guy, perhaps a guard
The lead does such a good job with morale, he might be given early parole
In steps the bad guy, the lead must wrestle the antagonist (Who is now the real-life heel)
If the lead wins he gets parole; if he loses he does not (Now we have the stakes)
The catch is, the guard wrestles dirty
See lessOf course, this could be mistaken for a wrestling version of ‘the longest yard’ so take what I have written with a grain of salt.