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Professional: The Faunus Rights Revolution is a thematically charged action and war drama, centered around a trio of young Faunus fighting to save their people from persecution, deportation, and death at the hands of Humanity. Commercial: In the world of Remnant, the Faunus face oppression and deportation at the hands of humans. Three young heroes join the resistance to defend their people.
You need a lead character (And you should give a one or two-word description of their personality) You need a face to the bad guy (Saying 'humans' is very broad, you need a specific human who represents the oppression) What is? the objective goal (Join the resistance and defend their people is vagueRead more
You need a lead character (And you should give a one or two-word description of their personality)
You need a face to the bad guy (Saying ‘humans’ is very broad, you need a specific human who represents the oppression)
What is? the objective goal (Join the resistance and defend their people is vague, what specifically must they do, must they blow up a bridge, kidnap a specific leader, how will they resist)
The good news is this concept sounds intriguing
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When her father is captured by the greedy owner of an underground casino, an unorthodox cat burglar must convince her professional poker player sister to join forces to take down the bad guy and rescue their father. — All IN
If you're going to have the bad guy be Navajo, you should have the father be Native American as well.Perhaps a Navajo law enforcement officer investigating the casino. When he discovers illegal activity they capture him.This event sets the story in motion as the 'wild' younger sister who took on lifRead more
If you’re going to have the bad guy be Navajo, you should have the father be Native American as well.
Perhaps a Navajo law enforcement officer investigating the casino. When he discovers illegal activity they capture him.
This event sets the story in motion as the ‘wild’ younger sister who took on life as a cat burglar (To steal back Navajo artifacts) must convince her by the book and uptight sister to join forces to rescue dad.
Perhaps the sister is now a district attorney?but in her youth was an amazing poker player.
See lessWhen her father is captured by the greedy owner of an underground casino, an unorthodox cat burglar must convince her professional poker player sister to join forces to take down the bad guy and rescue their father. — All IN
"When her father is captured?by the greedy owner of an underground casino, an unorthodox cat burglar?must convince her professional poker player sister to join forces to take down the bad guy and rescue their father."
“When her father is captured?by the greedy owner of an underground casino, an unorthodox cat burglar?must convince her professional poker player sister to join forces to take down the bad guy and rescue their father.”
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