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1: You don't have to tell us what they decide to do, just begin with the action 2: You need a lead character, one person in the group that stands out. 3: You need a bigger goal than "Finding a lost village" (Or at least make it a unique village in some way;? a village where no one ages for instance)Read more
1: You don’t have to tell us what they decide to do, just begin with the action
2: You need a lead character, one person in the group that stands out.
3: You need a bigger goal than “Finding a lost village” (Or at least make it a unique village in some way;? a village where no one ages for instance)
Here would be an example:
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“When he’s captured by a powerful witch-doctor while searching for the lost temple of Isis, a smarmy archaeology professor, and his class must convince the witch-doctors daughter to join their cause if they are to escape and make the discovery of a lifetime.”
After a young girl finds a strange red cloak that influences and changes her behavior, her twin brother must rescue her from a strange forest before she completely forgets who she is.
The lead character would be the one with the goal.Since the brother has the goal "Rescue his sister" the brother would be the lead character.-------------------------------------------"When his sister runs off to the woods after discovering a mysterious cape,? a distraught twin must discover the capRead more
The lead character would be the one with the goal.
Since the brother has the goal “Rescue his sister” the brother would be the lead character.
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“When his sister runs off to the woods after discovering a mysterious cape,? a distraught twin must discover the capes power and destroy it, if he’s to rescue his sister.”
See lessWhen her father is captured by the greedy owner of an underground casino, an unorthodox cat burglar must convince her professional poker player sister to join forces to take down the bad guy and rescue their father. — All IN
Also, you should change your inciting incident, The goal is to rescue his daughter, so the inciting incident would be his daughter getting kidnapped. (or taken) The goal and the inciting incident should match.
Also, you should change your inciting incident, The goal is to rescue his daughter, so the inciting incident would be his daughter getting kidnapped. (or taken)
The goal and the inciting incident should match.
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