Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
When the office nice guy?s ?work wife? starts sending him mixed signals about her relationship and impending move with her long-distance boyfriend, he risks his career and friendship by confessing his true feelings for her before he loses her forever.
Does the confession happen at the end of the story or the beginning?Because if the confession happens at the end of the story it should not be in the logline. But if the confession is at the beginning, it is the event that sets the story in motion and the logline should be about what happens after tRead more
Does the confession happen at the end of the story or the beginning?
Because if the confession happens at the end of the story it should not be in the logline.
See lessBut if the confession is at the beginning, it is the event that sets the story in motion and the logline should be about what happens after the confession.
“Five adults must face their past sins when they are forced to deal with the vengeful spirit of a recently deceased woman whom they falsely accused of abuse when she babysat them seventeen years ago.?
There is a lot of backstory in your logline... Who is the lead character and what must the lead character do to stop the vengeful spirit of the babysitter? (On a side note, why should we pull for the lead character to succeed since the lead falsely accused the babysitter of abuse?)
There is a lot of backstory in your logline…
Who is the lead character and what must the lead character do to stop the vengeful spirit of the babysitter?
(On a side note, why should we pull for the lead character to succeed since the lead falsely accused the babysitter of abuse?)
See less?Massachusetts, 1692: The leader of a coven must convince a Puritan minister to work with her to find and stop a powerful and cunning excommunicated sorceress whom she suspects is secretly behind the Salem Witch Trials.?
I think the premise?is solid It would help the logline draw in its reader with a specific and personal event that would set the lead character?on their course of action. Perhaps the sister of the puritan could be accused of being a witch. (Just an example)
I think the premise?is solid
It would help the logline draw in its reader with a specific and personal event that would set the lead character?on their course of action.
Perhaps the sister of the puritan could be accused of being a witch. (Just an example)
See less