1. Posted: May 4, 2018In:

    When a misguided and socially frustrated young Muslim is manipulated online by a violent female imposter this nerve-shredding urban drama constructs a series of events that entwines the stringent crimes of some of modern societies most deviant personalities.

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    Richiev Singularity

    You should write the logline from the point of view of the lead character not the point of view of a narrator.

    You should write the logline from the point of view of the lead character not the point of view of a narrator.

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  2. Posted: May 3, 2018In:

    Three internally flawed women, with traumatic childhoods, are forced to navigate through life?s peaks and valleys in the affluent suburbs of Atlanta, Georgia.

    Richiev Singularity

    Even in slice of life stories, a lead character will be pro-active. You haven't told us anything pro-active about the actions of your lead character in this logline, nor your last logline attempt. What does your lead character do? What do they want? How do they plan on achieving what they want?

    Even in slice of life stories, a lead character will be pro-active. You haven’t told us anything pro-active about the actions of your lead character in this logline, nor your last logline attempt.

    What does your lead character do? What do they want? How do they plan on achieving what they want?

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  3. Posted: May 2, 2018In:

    After they make a wish to kill their parents, a group of teenagers discover they?ve messed with an entity that makes this wish come true.

    Richiev Singularity

    "When a wish goes horribly wrong, a rebellious teen must team with his friends to take down an evil genie before the entity kills his parents."

    “When a wish goes horribly wrong, a rebellious teen must team with his friends to take down an evil genie before the entity kills his parents.”

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