Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
Cursed by an Indian medicine man, a badass rocker must overcome the curse, to find the love of his life.
Another thingThe goal and the inciting incident should relate to one another.Inciting incident: Cursed Goal: Find a?cureFinding 'the love of his life' comes out of nowhere and has nothing to do with being cursed. You should drop that from the logline. (Unless the curse is, 'he will never find true lRead more
Another thing
The goal and the inciting incident should relate to one another.
Inciting incident: Cursed
Goal: Find a?cure
Finding ‘the love of his life’ comes out of nowhere and has nothing to do with being cursed. You should drop that from the logline. (Unless the curse is, ‘he will never find true love’ which seems like an odd curse [or goal] for a badass rocker)
See lessCursed by an Indian medicine man, a badass rocker must overcome the curse, to find the love of his life.
I agree with dpg, You should tell us what the curse is. The curse?will be the hook of the movie, as a result, it should be in the logline. For instance, in the movie thinner, the lead character is cursed by a gypsy to lose weight.? At first, the lead character, who is overweight thinks this is greatRead more
I agree with dpg, You should tell us what the curse is. The curse?will be the hook of the movie, as a result, it should be in the logline.
For instance, in the movie thinner, the lead character is cursed by a gypsy to lose weight.? At first, the lead character, who is overweight thinks this is great but it doesn’t stop, the lead just gets thinner and thinner.
So what is the curse?
See lessWhen a misguided and socially frustrated young Muslim is manipulated online by a violent female imposter this nerve-shredding urban drama constructs a series of events that entwines the stringent crimes of some of modern societies most deviant personalities.
Here would be an example of a logline told from the point of view of the lead character: Your logline would probably be different because I am not sure of the exact plot details of your story. ----------------------------------------------- "When he's bullied online, a misguided Muslim seeks to discRead more
Here would be an example of a logline told from the point of view of the lead character: Your logline would probably be different because I am not sure of the exact plot details of your story.
See less———————————————–
“When he’s bullied online, a misguided Muslim seeks to discover the identity of the female imposter harassing him, in order to get revenge.”