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Three childhood friends mimic the devastating dynamics of their parental relationships, even to the point of committing murder.
Who's the lead character? What is their goal? And what is standing in their way?
Who’s the lead character?
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And what is standing in their way?
In a last attempt to prove himself, a washed-up detective must unravel the secrets of a small-town to find two missing children.
"When two small-town kids go missing, a washed-up detective..." Just curious, what's standing in the detective's?way? Unraveling secrets is the basic job description of being a detective. Is there a bad guy of any sort? Someone standing in the way of your lead doing his job?
“When two small-town kids go missing, a washed-up detective…”
Just curious, what’s standing in the detective’s?way? Unraveling secrets is the basic job description of being a detective. Is there a bad guy of any sort? Someone standing in the way of your lead doing his job?
See lessWhen the office nice guy?s ?work wife? starts sending him mixed signals about her relationship and impending move with her long-distance boyfriend, he risks his career and friendship by confessing his true feelings for her before he loses her forever.
After reading your last logline as well as this one. I think for this premise to work,? you need to increase the dramatic tension by creating a stronger reason why the work wife can't be with the lead. Audiences are smart, they understand that the two leads are supposed to be together from the firstRead more
After reading your last logline as well as this one.
I think for this premise to work,? you need to increase the dramatic tension by creating a stronger reason why the work wife can’t be with the lead.
Audiences are smart, they understand that the two leads are supposed to be together from the first time they enter the story.
What makes the story interesting is that there is an insurmountable obstacle?keeping them apart.
Romance is about two people desperately wanting to be together, but a barrier equally powerful keeping them apart.
You might consider having the ‘work wife’ from a different country such as India. It is not her ‘boyfriend’ but her fiance.
Both her family and her fiance’s family (Both who hold traditional Indian values) are gearing up for the wedding and it would be a very big deal if she broke off the engagement.
It could destroy her entire relationship with her family.
She can’t just break up with the guy.
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