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Touched by his family’s grief, a deceased, self-centred college graduate has three days until his funeral to show his family how much they mean to him too so he can have peace in the afterlife.
This is a much stronger logline than your previous attempts.
This is a much stronger logline than your previous attempts.
See lessRevised: When a bumbling alien pollutes the timeline, he and his adopted human family must travel back in history, and prevent the apocalypse? again!
I have to admit your logline got me thinking about a different story.what if there was a service, like 'total recall' where you could go back in time and meet your hero.The lead character has always had a crush on Marilyn Monroe,He goes back in time to meet her, and they have a magical night togetheRead more
I have to admit your logline got me thinking about a different story.
what if there was a service, like ‘total recall’ where you could go back in time and meet your hero.
The lead character has always had a crush on Marilyn Monroe,
He goes back in time to meet her, and they have a magical night together talking about their hopes and dreams and getting to know one another.
but the lead character breaks the rules and confesses he is from the future.
When the lead character gets back, the timeline is changed and an evil dictator is in charge of the world.
His night with Marilyn gives her hope for the future and confidence in herself.
She doesn’t have an affair with Kennedy but instead convinces Kennedy he should be faithful
Kennedy takes a vacation with his wife instead of going to Dallas…
Kennedy lives and servers 2 terms, his brother Robert is the next president for?8 years
Now in order to save humanity, the lead character must go back in time and kill Marilyn Monroe.
He must do it, but can he do? Can you kill one person you love in order to save millions you don’t even know?
~Killing Marilyn~
Revised: When a bumbling alien pollutes the timeline, he and his adopted human family must travel back in history, and prevent the apocalypse? again!
Since you say this is part of a series, I will make another?attempt at a logline example. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "When a bumbling but well-meaning?alien pollutes the timeline, a group of rogue humans must travel?back iRead more
Since you say this is part of a series, I will make another?attempt at a logline example.
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“When a bumbling but well-meaning?alien pollutes the timeline, a group of rogue humans must travel?back in time to clean up the anomalies and save the world from an apocalypse.”