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Revised: When a bumbling alien pollutes the timeline, he and his adopted human family must travel back in history, and prevent the apocalypse? again!
After reading your logline, it is difficult for me to tell when the backstory ends and when the actual story begins.I am also unclear what must actually be done because,?"interfere in key historical events" is vague. You should pick a specific event.Here would be an example of picking a specific eveRead more
After reading your logline, it is difficult for me to tell when the backstory ends and when the actual story begins.
See lessI am also unclear what must actually be done because,?”interfere in key historical events” is vague. You should pick a specific event.
Here would be an example of picking a specific event that must be changed in order to stave the apocalypse.
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“When a well-meaning?but bumbling alien interferes in our timeline, causing the end of human civilization, he must?go back in time and prevent a brash reality star from becoming President to save mankind.”
An alien politician whose world was colonised by humans must fight a corrupt system and a supremacist organisation to rise to the top.
If this story is still in the creation stage, you might consider the Old Testament story of Moses, Your story and the story of the Ten Commandments?could have an interesting parallel. I only say this because Moses's adult story begins when he sees a laborer getting victimized, this event (EventuallyRead more
If this story is still in the creation stage, you might consider the Old Testament story of Moses, Your story and the story of the Ten Commandments?could have an interesting parallel.
I only say this because Moses’s adult story begins when he sees a laborer getting victimized, this event (Eventually) leads to “Let my people go”
See lessA Rebellious Saharan Princess, escapes the palace to search for her abducted mother, but discovers she is the key to the survival or enslavement of the world.
Okay, I see the story a little clearer now. However, I am unclear as to what the lead character must do? In your snippets, you tell us what the Dragon King must do to be released from his human body prison, but not what the lead character?must do in order to stop him. Does she need to find a magic sRead more
Okay, I see the story a little clearer now.
However, I am unclear as to what the lead character must do?
In your snippets, you tell us what the Dragon King must do to be released from his human body prison, but not what the lead character?must do in order to stop him.
Does she need to find a magic sword? Find a reclusive wizard? Go to an ancient ruin and get an amulet of some sort? This would be an important part of your logline.
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