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Forced to selling her life over by a mean spirited Crip, a cold hearted street dancer, must rise above , in order to be with a successful photographer who is the only one capable of bringing her peace and love.
Forced to selling (Sell) her life over... What does this mean in practical terms? Are you talking prostitution, or are you talking a bad airtight contract of some sort?Must rise above... Rise above what? This should probably be droppedin order to be with a successful photographer... How does this reRead more
Forced to selling (Sell) her life over… What does this mean in practical terms? Are you talking prostitution, or are you talking a bad airtight contract of some sort?
Must rise above… Rise above what? This should probably be dropped
in order to be with a successful photographer… How does this relate to selling her life over?
You have an inciting incident and you have a goal, so that is good, I am just not sure how they relate to one another.
See lessI think with a little clarity this will be a much better logline.
When a team of employees learns that a once in a lifetime redundancy is being offered to one of them, a lone employee encourages the others to demonstrate their willingness to be the one retrenched. In the process, the team learns more about who their colleagues really are for them
Possible title: The Upside of Downsizing
Possible title: The Upside of Downsizing
See lessWhen a team of employees learns that a once in a lifetime redundancy is being offered to one of them, a lone employee encourages the others to demonstrate their willingness to be the one retrenched. In the process, the team learns more about who their colleagues really are for them
"When they are told, due to downsizing, one of them will be fired but receive?a 400k severance?check, five, hardworking, lifetime employs suddenly vie to see who can be the most useless."
“When they are told, due to downsizing, one of them will be fired but receive?a 400k severance?check, five, hardworking, lifetime employs suddenly vie to see who can be the most useless.”
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