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After their identities are stolen, a young couple need to find their enemies, fast.
"When their identities are stolen, a couple on the verge of buying their dream house must..."
“When their identities are stolen, a couple on the verge of buying their dream house must…”
See lessTrapped into a lease with his ex-wife, a young writer must come to terms with single life, all whilst making plans for his future.
Trapped into a lease with his ex-wife... Good start, anyone who has ever been stuck in a?bad lease will understandA young writer must... still going strong, however, don't use the term young, instead, give us something about your lead character's personality.Now drop the rest and tell us what he musRead more
Trapped into a lease with his ex-wife… Good start, anyone who has ever been stuck in a?bad lease will understand
A young writer must… still going strong, however, don’t use the term young, instead, give us something about your lead character’s personality.
Now drop the rest and tell us what he must do in relation to the inciting incident. How will he get himself out of the bad lease?
The goal should relate to the incident that begins the story. (Trapped in a lease with his ex)
See lessAfter an young girl is bought from slavery, she is taken to a school where she becomes a witch, where she uses her abilities to kill her former master and save her family.
Does your story have an inciting incident??If not, this may be one of the few stories that doesn't need a traditional inciting incident, however if your story has one, a sort of 'kill the dog' moment it will help.I know this is going to sound vicious but on her wedding night the slave owner kills heRead more
Does your story have an inciting incident??If not, this may be one of the few stories that doesn’t need a traditional inciting incident, however if your story has one, a sort of ‘kill the dog’ moment it will help.
I know this is going to sound vicious but on her wedding night the slave owner kills her new husband and rapes her, she runs away and joins a coven and the rest is the revenge story.
Just a thought
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