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When a hang slip breaks a house apart shortly after a frustrated mum and wife just told her workaholic husband that she wants a divorce, the whole family has to work together for the last time and survive, by helping each other on the safe side of the house, while its pieces are drifting away from minute to minute and might fall from the mountain soon.
Your logline is a little long, and while the divorce will make a great B story in your script; in the logline you should concentrate on the impending disaster.
Your logline is a little long, and while the divorce will make a great B story in your script; in the logline you should concentrate on the impending disaster.
See lessWhen a top notch agent finds a drug that is killing people, she enlists the help of her lazy, post war, pension living boyfriend to aid her in finding out how to stop the drug before an entire city is wiped out.
The agent of what? The agent of s.h.i.e.l.d.? Agent to the stars? FBI agent? M:i6 agent? It doesn't take that many words to say CIA agent or DEA agent and give the reader a little more clarity.
The agent of what? The agent of s.h.i.e.l.d.? Agent to the stars? FBI agent? M:i6 agent?
It doesn’t take that many words to say CIA agent or DEA agent and give the reader a little more clarity.
See lessWhen a psychic accountant with gypsy roots, plagued by crippling secrets and the dead, is blackmailed to fix an accounting problem connected to Nazi?s it turns accounting into crusading.
Being a psychic accountant sounds like it is the hook of the storyBut then the lead is given a job that seems to need, just normal accounting.If this is the case then being a psychic isn't relevant to the story and should be dropped from the loglineor if being a psychic is important, you should tellRead more
Being a psychic accountant sounds like it is the hook of the story
But then the lead is given a job that seems to need, just normal accounting.
If this is the case then being a psychic isn’t relevant to the story and should be dropped from the logline
or if being a psychic is important, you should tell us ‘in the logline’ why her being a?psychic is needed for the lead to accomplish?her goal.
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