1. Posted: March 1, 2018In:

    After an young girl is bought from slavery, she is taken to a school where she becomes a witch, where she uses her abilities to kill her former master and save her family.

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    I looked back at some of the different loglines you have written.This story idea and logline are the most concise?and would be an excellent?script for you to concentrate on.Craig's advice is solid and he also adds 'freeing her family' as a positive goal so it isn't just revenge.It might help if it tRead more

    I looked back at some of the different loglines you have written.

    This story idea and logline are the most concise?and would be an excellent?script for you to concentrate on.

    Craig’s advice is solid and he also adds ‘freeing her family’ as a positive goal so it isn’t just revenge.

    It might help if it turns out the slave owner is actually a dark warlock or something of that nature. (Just an idea)

    Anyway, a story like this practically writes itself and after you write an outline, the script would probably only take a few weeks to write.?

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  2. Posted: February 28, 2018In:

    When a team of employees learns that a once in a lifetime redundancy is being offered to one of them, a lone employee encourages the others to demonstrate their willingness to be the one retrenched. In the process, the team learns more about who their colleagues really are for them

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    I am a little confused by the term "a once in a lifetime redundancy" Not sure what that means in practical terms. However, it sounds interesting

    I am a little confused by the term “a once in a lifetime redundancy”
    Not sure what that means in practical terms.
    However, it sounds interesting

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  3. Posted: February 28, 2018In:

    A neglected, broken business woman must find the strength to learn how to love herself with the help of a schizophrenia film-maker, and when feelings start unravel between the two, it result the fear of her past to haunt her once again she tried to escape.

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    Your lead character 'learning to lover herself' makes for a good internal goal but for the logline you need a solid external goal.What is the story about?

    Your lead character ‘learning to lover herself’ makes for a good internal goal but for the logline you need a solid external goal.

    What is the story about?

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