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  1. Posted: February 18, 2018In: Action

    After a scientific accident that leaves everyone dead and one with fire abilities, the survivor must travel to a sacred temple to learn how to control his abilities.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 19, 2018 at 11:10 am

    As Nir points out, your latest attempt is closer, However, your description of your characters is vague. You describe your lead character as 'someone' and you describe the antagonist as ' another' ... this really tells us nothing. You can give us a brief description without actually adding too manyRead more

    As Nir points out, your latest attempt is closer,

    However, your description of your characters is vague.

    You describe your lead character as ‘someone’ and you describe the antagonist as ‘ another’ … this really tells us nothing. You can give us a brief description without actually adding too many extra words to the logline. Here would be an example:

    “When an accident leaves a nerdy student with the ability to manipulate fire. He must race to an ancient temple while avoiding a ruthless cult that wishes to use his abilities to awaken a long-dormant fire god.”

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  2. Posted: February 18, 2018In: Action

    After refusing to do a job, a contract is put out on him where he must decide between his survival and the life of his target.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 18, 2018 at 10:52 pm

    You are missing the hook. Why did he refuse the job?

    You are missing the hook.

    Why did he refuse the job?

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  3. Posted: February 18, 2018In: Action

    After a scientific accident that leaves everyone dead and one with fire abilities, the survivor must travel to a sacred temple to learn how to control his abilities.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 18, 2018 at 1:39 pm

    You are mixing your genres. Why would a temple be able to teach him to control abilities he obtained through science?

    You are mixing your genres.

    Why would a temple be able to teach him to control abilities he obtained through science?

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