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When her daughter is kidnapped at a local convenience store, Midge Phaeton must bring the sex trafficking to its knees, but when she is caught, and beaten to a pulp, she must outsmart the traffickers in order to save her daughter from being exploited or killed.
If it's not in the logline, it's not in the logline...There may be times when you might hint at things in a logline but elements like conflict (As dpg?points out) and stakes, should be clear from reading a logline.You should be specific about why delivering the car in 24 hours is a difficult?task, aRead more
If it’s not in the logline, it’s not in the logline…
There may be times when you might hint at things in a logline but elements like conflict (As dpg?points out) and stakes, should be clear from reading a logline.
You should be specific about why delivering the car in 24 hours is a difficult?task, and you should state it clearly in the logline…
Also; Is this a road movie like the ‘Gumball Rally’? where the protagonist?has to drive a very long distance in a short period of time or is this a chase movie like ‘Hit and Run” or ‘Smoky and the bandit? where in order to accomplish the goal the lead must stay away from the bad guy?
In other words, what is standing in the lead characters way?
See lessAs his best friend – an alcoholic old Hollywood star – begs for death, a young reporter sees his own fate and takes a dramatic step to rewrite the story of his life.
One more note, what I am about to say may not be true in the story but it does come across in the logline. The lead character comes across as very self-centered. His best friend?begs for death, and his thought is... I really need to re-evaluate my life. This is not a good friend. A good friend wouldRead more
One more note, what I am about to say may not be true in the story but it does come across in the logline.
The lead character comes across as very self-centered. His best friend?begs for death, and his thought is… I really need to re-evaluate my life.
This is not a good friend. A good friend would try to help his best friend rediscover his love for life. Instead, his best friend begs for death and the lead character decides, this is really all about me.
If this is not true (That the lead isn’t self-centered) you might want to re-write the logline to reflect the true character of your lead.
See lessIf it is true (That your lead character is actually totally self-centered) you might want to add in your logline a reason for us to like your lead character and want them to succeed.
When a black high school football star mysteriously disappears, his four daring friends and their dog set out to find him, unraveling the dark secrets of their small town and a possible serial killer among the town?s elite.
On a totally different?note, sometimes I like to guess at things... my guess: The mayor is a vampire :)
On a totally different?note, sometimes I like to guess at things… my guess: The mayor is a vampire 🙂
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