1. Posted: February 6, 2018In:

    Fueled by their own ghostly experiences, a passionate believer and her lifelong best friend do battle for those plagued with the paranormal with nowhere else to turn.

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    Instead of saying they are fueled by their own ghostly experiences, you should give us a specific experience. What specifically happened? (And preferably something that happened right now, not in their childhood)

    Instead of saying they are fueled by their own ghostly experiences, you should give us a specific experience. What specifically happened? (And preferably something that happened right now, not in their childhood)

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  2. Posted: February 5, 2018In:

    A girl searches for the family that owned hers during slavery. On her quest she discovers things really aren?t black and white. Will she exact revenge or die trying.

    Richiev Singularity

    Why now? What event sets her on this very drastic course of action?

    Why now? What event sets her on this very drastic course of action?

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  3. Posted: February 5, 2018In:

    When a introverted pastry chef realizes she has forgotten an important looming tea party she must quickly earn the admiration of the rowdy teenagers next door to borrow the ingredients she needs.

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    What ingredient? Is this Colorado? (Cause I could see some teens having a 'special' ingredient that the chef does not have if it were Colorado)

    What ingredient? Is this Colorado? (Cause I could see some teens having a ‘special’ ingredient that the chef does not have if it were Colorado)

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