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  1. Posted: February 3, 2018In: Heist

    When the end of an abusive relationship sends an isolated college student reeling, she struggles to regain confidence by participating in a legendary campus tradition: stealing the hands from the campus clocktower.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 4, 2018 at 11:20 am

    "When the end of an abusive relationship forces an isolated college student to recognize that it's her lack of confidence that has led her into one bad relationship to another, she decides to face her fear of heights and participate in a legendary campus tradition: Stealing the hands from the campusRead more

    “When the end of an abusive relationship forces an isolated college student to recognize that it’s her lack of confidence that has led her into one bad relationship to another, she decides to face her fear of heights and participate in a legendary campus tradition: Stealing the hands from the campus clock tower.”

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  2. Posted: February 2, 2018In: Thriller

    When the daughter of a retired police officer is kidnapped by the son of an innocent man whom he sent to the death row, he must find the true culprit in order to obtain the release of her daughter before the day of the execution.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 3, 2018 at 9:08 am

    Why this is a good concept 1: Ticking clock, obviously the lead has until the death sentence is carried out to find the killer and save his daughter. Preferably a short amount of time: Perhaps the final appeal fell through now the son has taken this action with only days to go. 2: An understandableRead more

    Why this is a good concept

    1: Ticking clock, obviously the lead has until the death sentence is carried out to find the killer and save his daughter. Preferably a short amount of time: Perhaps the final appeal fell through now the son has taken this action with only days to go.

    2: An understandable bad guy: We can all relate to a son wanting to save his ‘innocent’ father from death row. (Just make sure to point out in the script that he went through all the correct and legal attempts to free his father before taking this drastic action)

    3: An understandable good guy:? A father wanting to save his daughter is something the audience can relate to, not only that the lead can point out, he didn’t convict anyone, a jury did.

    In the script, (Not the logline) you might want to have a second bad guy, someone like the prosecuting attorney, who, as the story unfolds the audience discovers, rigged the system to get the ‘win’

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  3. Posted: February 2, 2018In: Drama

    After her husbands release from prison, and her brother going to prison. A inveterate young lawyer must help her husband transition back into society while trying to fight her brothers case.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 3, 2018 at 8:39 am

    Inveterate and young seem like they don't go well together. Kind of an odd pair of adjectives to choose. How does the lead character being set in her ways to relate to the goal of helping either the Husband of Brother. (Either in a positive?or negative way)

    Inveterate and young seem like they don’t go well together. Kind of an odd pair of adjectives to choose.

    How does the lead character being set in her ways to relate to the goal of helping either the Husband of Brother. (Either in a positive?or negative way)

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