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A lat-night diner waitress bites off more than she can chew when she tries role-playing with two estranged brothers.
As a rule of thumb, try to avoid writing loglines that can be interpreted two wildly different ways.
As a rule of thumb, try to avoid writing loglines that can be interpreted two wildly different ways.
See lessA lat-night diner waitress bites off more than she can chew when she tries role-playing with two estranged brothers.
Role-playing? Are we talking dungeons and dragons? "When a late night waitress gets talked into playing dungeons and dragons with her only two customers, she finds herself and the world of Faerun in deep danger and only her half-orc warrior can save the night."
Role-playing? Are we talking dungeons and dragons?
“When a late night waitress gets talked into playing dungeons and dragons with her only two customers, she finds herself and the world of Faerun in deep danger and only her half-orc warrior can save the night.”
See lessBritish queen Elizabeth grandson went to Malta to find the Vanished historical Signet Ring in Malta after enshroud his identity, get out of the blue.
Here would be an example of a character who 'must' find the ring: (Obviously your logline will be different)----- "When a bumbling crown prince loses his mother's royal signet ring, He has three days before the signing of an important peace treaty to find the ring, or lose his place as heir to the tRead more
Here would be an example of a character who ‘must’ find the ring: (Obviously your logline will be different)
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“When a bumbling crown prince loses his mother’s royal signet ring, He has three days before the signing of an important peace treaty to find the ring, or lose his place as heir to the throne”
Now the lead ‘must’ find the ring… Why him? because he lost it. What are the consequences? He will lose the crown.?
So in your logline you should add the element which makes it of vital importance the lead find the ring. It will make the logline more compelling and draw the reader in.
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