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  1. Posted: January 13, 2018In: Drama

    British queen Elizabeth grandson went to Malta to find the Vanished historical Signet Ring in Malta after enshroud his identity, get out of the blue.

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    Added an answer on January 14, 2018 at 10:05 am

    Why him? Why not one of the queen's guards for instance? Is there a reason it has to be him? Is there a consequence if he fails?In a story, the goal has to mean 'everything' to the lead character. It could be something small to me or you, like getting a watch, but to the lead character it has to meaRead more

    Why him? Why not one of the queen’s guards for instance? Is there a reason it has to be him? Is there a consequence if he fails?

    In a story, the goal has to mean ‘everything’ to the lead character. It could be something small to me or you, like getting a watch, but to the lead character it has to mean everything. Like the watch in Pulp Fiction. To you or me it would just a watch but to the Bruce Willis?character, it meant everything. He was willing to risk his life (and much more lol) to get that watch.

    Why do we want the lead character to succeed??What makes the ring so important to the lead character?

    Why does he ‘need‘ to find the ring?

    Because that should be in the logline.

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  2. Posted: January 13, 2018In: Drama

    British queen Elizabeth grandson went to Malta to find the Vanished historical Signet Ring in Malta after enshroud his identity, get out of the blue.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on January 14, 2018 at 3:02 am

    I am not sure I understand the reason he needs to find the ring.

    I am not sure I understand the reason he needs to find the ring.

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  3. Posted: January 11, 2018In: Fantasy

    A bounty hunter and a renegade race against the power-hungry to find an utopia lost in time.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on January 13, 2018 at 6:24 pm

    If the story begins with your lead killing a corrupt noble. That should be in the logline.

    If the story begins with your lead killing a corrupt noble. That should be in the logline.

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