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  1. Posted: January 7, 2018In: Thriller

    When a grieving widow learns her husband took a bullet intended for her, she must survive long enough to discover who wants her dead.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on January 7, 2018 at 3:23 pm

    Just curious, but how does she discover the bullet was meant for her, but not discover who wants her dead?

    Just curious, but how does she discover the bullet was meant for her, but not discover who wants her dead?

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  2. Posted: January 5, 2018In: Comedy

    Now an old man, Elon Musk reveals that the private keys to 1.5 million bitcoins are hidden in the glove box of his Tesla Roadster. The one orbiting around Mars. The Space race just got real.

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    Added an answer on January 5, 2018 at 5:21 am

    In a logline, you have a lead character, something happens to that lead character to give them a goal. There are obstacles, sometimes a ticking clock or some irony... Who is the lead character? From the way it's written, it doesn't seem as if the old Billionaire is the lead character, he is just whoRead more

    In a logline, you have a lead character, something happens to that lead character to give them a goal. There are obstacles, sometimes a ticking clock or some irony…

    Who is the lead character?

    From the way it’s written, it doesn’t seem as if the old Billionaire is the lead character, he is just who starts the story in motion. So the lead character would be one of the men or women in the space race for the coins… who you haven’t named in the logline.

    Without a lead character, you have no logline.

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  3. Posted: January 4, 2018In: Thriller

    To counter a growing malevolence, a young woman in 16th century England, must embrace both her growing powers and her destiny to change the course of history.

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    Added an answer on January 4, 2018 at 7:30 pm

    What growing power must she embrace? The power of magic? The power of the mind? The power persuasion? Adding just a little specific detail instead of a generality will improve your logline.

    What growing power must she embrace? The power of magic? The power of the mind? The power persuasion?

    Adding just a little specific detail instead of a generality will improve your logline.

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