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When faced with life as a sharecropper, a young girl decides to run away and pursue her dream of becoming a musician.
This is still just set-up, the story would be what she must do to become a musician (Soul Singer) Also, because there are many stories about a small town girl heading to the city to make it big... you need to add the element in your script that sets apart your story from the rest.
This is still just set-up, the story would be what she must do to become a musician (Soul Singer)
Also, because there are many stories about a small town girl heading to the city to make it big…
See lessyou need to add the element in your script that sets apart your story from the rest.
Present day, UK: A son flees his father?s wrath after his mother is accidentally killed but members of their martial arts family are driven to take sides and the inevitable showdown threatens to destroy them all.
If the secret is the inciting incident, then you should tell us what the secret is in the logline... That will be the 'hook' of your story.
If the secret is the inciting incident, then you should tell us what the secret is in the logline… That will be the ‘hook’ of your story.
See lessA disillusioned crusader returns home to find wife in danger of losing her soul.
What does, "...in danger of losing her soul," mean?Has she become a back slider? Is some evil being after her? is she listening to Pat Boone records instead of Aretha Franklin?Here would be an example of a logline with specifics: Yours would be different of course. ----- "When he comes home do discoRead more
What does, “…in danger of losing her soul,” mean?
Has she become a back slider?
Is some evil being after her?
is she listening to Pat Boone records instead of Aretha Franklin?
Here would be an example of a logline with specifics: Yours would be different of course.
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“When he comes home do discover his wife has made a deal with the devil for his safe return, a disillusioned crusader must win three combat challenges against Satan’s?champions to win back her soul”