1. Posted: September 2, 2017In:

    After a childhood encounter with a haunted house, two best friends use their extensive knowledge of all things paranormal to provide enthusiastic, yet extremely unorthodox, investigative services to others experiencing the supernatural, much to the dismay of those they are determined to help.

    Richiev Singularity

    Is this logline for a movie script or a TV script?

    Is this logline for a movie script or a TV script?

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  2. Posted: September 1, 2017In:

    Falling in love while helping a cat woman return to her Earth alone leaves an insular college student struggling to maintain his belief in her and find a way through the gateway.

    Richiev Singularity

    This logline is a slight bit unclear I think the best starting point would be, what event sets this story in motion? When (This happens) an Insular college student must... ??? Once you have this event down in the logline, then I think the rest will fall into place.

    This logline is a slight bit unclear

    I think the best starting point would be, what event sets this story in motion?

    When (This happens) an Insular college student must… ???

    Once you have this event down in the logline, then I think the rest will fall into place.

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  3. Posted: August 31, 2017In:

    After a shape shifter saves the life of her best friend who was raped, she exposes herself to the village witch doctor who controls the village and is hellbent on destroying her.

    Richiev Singularity

    You have given us the set-up to your story, The story would be what she must do about it. ------------------------------------------------ "When she exposes herself to the village witch doctor after using her powers to save ?her best friend, a shape shifter must..." (Escape? Confront? Destroy?) ----Read more

    You have given us the set-up to your story, The story would be what she must do about it.
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    “When she exposes herself to the village witch doctor after using her powers to save ?her best friend, a shape shifter must…” (Escape? Confront? Destroy?)
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    This seems like a good idea for a story, hope this helped.

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