1. Posted: August 28, 2017In:

    After the world’s military is wiped out by an advanced inter-dimensional civilisation, a group of mis-fit ex-marines must put their differences aside and work together to save humanity from their alien overlords.

    Richiev Singularity

    If this is a comedy/spoof you should write the logline in such a way that the reader can tell it's a comedy without having to name a genre. An ironic twist added to the logline will help with this. Here would be an example, your logline would be different of course. ------------------ "When he discoRead more

    If this is a comedy/spoof you should write the logline in such a way that the reader can tell it’s a comedy without having to name a genre. An ironic twist added to the logline will help with this.

    Here would be an example, your logline would be different of course.
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    “When he discovers the local mini brew gives the drinker immunity to the alien mind control, A reformed alcoholic must convince his AA group to fall off the wagon and attack the mother ship before he and his newly found drinking buddies sober up!”
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    –Beer and the art of motorcycle?    maintenance–
    –Beer to eternity–
    –How beer saved the world–

    Just some thoughts

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  2. Posted: August 29, 2017In:

    When an accident causes his little sister to be tormented by an evil creature only she can see, a know-it-all teenager must recreate the accident to help her. (28)

    Richiev Singularity

    You should be a little more specific when it comes to the accident Was it a car accident Did the toaster fall into the bathtub Was the accident the know-it-all teenagers fault Just a little bit of specifics will help Here would be my example of using a specific incident, your's will be different ofRead more

    You should be a little more specific when it comes to the accident

    Was it a car accident
    Did the toaster fall into the bathtub
    Was the accident the know-it-all teenagers fault
    Just a little bit of specifics will help

    Here would be my example of using a specific incident, your’s will be different of course.
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    “After his little sister falls in the swimming pool and has to be revived while he was babysitting, a unreliable teen must discover a way to defeat the creature that piggybacked it’s way into the world when she returned from the dead.”
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    Hoped that helped

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  3. Posted: August 29, 2017In:

    An undercover MI6 agent is sent to Berlin during the Cold War to investigate the murder of a fellow agent and recover a missing list of double agents. -ATOMIC BLONDE-

    Richiev Singularity

    You should give us a few details so your story stands out. ------------------------------------ Sent to Berlin to investigate the murder of a fellow secret agent, a sultry MI6 officer must infiltrate the soviet embassy disguised as high priced call girl and retrieve the top secret file that holds thRead more

    You should give us a few details so your story stands out.
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    Sent to Berlin to investigate the murder of a fellow secret agent, a sultry MI6 officer must infiltrate the soviet embassy disguised as high priced call girl and retrieve the top secret file that holds the details of the homicide, all under the nose of her supposed John; Leonid Brezhnev.”
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