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When an ?typical couple of thieves, tempted by the promise of money, get mixed up in the love triangle of two witches and a king, they will have to risk their lives to ensure the gates of hell remain shut.
Since the logline has a solid goal for the characters, what set's the story in motion should be directly related to that goal. "When the king and his witch lovers unlock the doors of hell, two bumbling thieves who've broken into the castle must become?unlikely?heroes and stop the ritual before it unRead more
Since the logline has a solid goal for the characters, what set’s the story in motion should be directly related to that goal.
“When the king and his witch lovers unlock the doors of hell, two bumbling thieves who’ve broken into the castle must become?unlikely?heroes and stop the ritual before it unleashes an evil horde onto the land.”
See lessWhen an ?typical couple of thieves, tempted by the promise of money, get mixed up in the love triangle of two witches and a king, they will have to risk their lives to ensure the gates of hell remain shut.
I would drop the love triangle aspect from the logline because it doesn't give us any story knowledge as written.
I would drop the love triangle aspect from the logline because it doesn’t give us any story knowledge as written.
See lessA young girl runs away from her sharecropping life to pursue her dream of becoming a blues legend.
This is just the set-up of your story. ?You need more information for it to be come a logline. "When she runs away from her sharecropping life, a determined singer must (Do this thing) if she is to fulfill her dream of becoming a blues legend."
This is just the set-up of your story. ?You need more information for it to be come a logline.
“When she runs away from her sharecropping life, a determined singer must (Do this thing) if she is to fulfill her dream of becoming a blues legend.”
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