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A moody princess meets two men at the edge of forest and takes advantage of their good nature, but one of the men take something else from her.
This describes a scene, A logline gives an overview of the story.
This describes a scene, A logline gives an overview of the story.
See lessAfter witnessing his grandfather’s murder, a New Mexico high school senior has a nervous breakdown and travels to Taos to remake his life – assuming false personas that are inspired by magazines he collects – while being pursued by his grandfather’s killer, who he discovers is one of his best friends.
Nurse Betty has a goal, she wanted to find Greg Kinnear. It's a crazy goal but a goal none the less.You logline is missing the goal for your character, things happen to the lead but the lead isn't proactive in your logline.What is the lead characters goal?
Nurse Betty has a goal, she wanted to find Greg Kinnear. It’s a crazy goal but a goal none the less.
You logline is missing the goal for your character, things happen to the lead but the lead isn’t proactive in your logline.
What is the lead characters goal?
See lessAfter the abrupt revelation of a family secret forced a now twice orphaned boy into a life of seedy trailer parks, he sets out on a last-ditch journey to assemble a cast of family members he needs to make a home of his own.
If the revelation of the secret is what sets the story in motion, You should tell us what that secret is.When he discovers he's adopted... When he discovers his real father was Barack Obama... When he discovers his mom and dad are really brother and sister... When he discovers he's an alien from a dRead more
If the revelation of the secret is what sets the story in motion, You should tell us what that secret is.
When he discovers he’s adopted…
When he discovers his real father was Barack Obama…
When he discovers his mom and dad are really brother and sister…
When he discovers he’s an alien from a distant planet…
The revealed secret is what will hook the reader, so you should tell us about it.
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If the secret’s revelation sets the story in motion: Add it to the logline.
If the secret is the third act big reveal: Don’t add it to the logline.