Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
Six reckless Hollywood archetypes go on a wild crime spree after they accidentally kill an escort in their new suburban neighborhood.
Your description of the characters does not draw the reader in. I would try saying it a different way. Find a unique quality that one or several of them have and add it to the logline. Otherwise if just reads, "When six generic characters go on a crime spree."
Your description of the characters does not draw the reader in. I would try saying it a different way. Find a unique quality that one or several of them have and add it to the logline. Otherwise if just reads, “When six generic characters go on a crime spree.”
See lessAfter years of forced thievery under his older brother, a repentant young burglar sets out to make amends with the people he’s wronged.
This premise is great, I think it would make for one of those feel good movies like the movie where the cop splits the lotto ticket with the waitress. However As for the logline, you need a better inciting incident. What causes him to take this course of action? What is it that compels him to make aRead more
This premise is great, I think it would make for one of those feel good movies like the movie where the cop splits the lotto ticket with the waitress.
However
As for the logline, you need a better inciting incident. What causes him to take this course of action? What is it that compels him to make amends…
See lessWhen summer comes and there is no more football to take up his time, a suddenly outed jock must adopt the ‘Gay Best Friend!!’ identity so he get a girlfriend so his parents won?t suspect he is gay.
I agree with DK. some parents are perfectly okay with their son or daughter coming out, some are not. Stakes would be something like; If his older brother had come out two years early and his parents had disowned him... now we know what the stakes are for the lead character if he comes out to his paRead more
I agree with DK. some parents are perfectly okay with their son or daughter coming out, some are not. Stakes would be something like; If his older brother had come out two years early and his parents had disowned him… now we know what the stakes are for the lead character if he comes out to his parent.
See less