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After a police station is attacked, a supernatural mercenary in custody must work with mundane cops to defend it from a group of faeries seeking the powerful artifact she stole.
Why don't the police just give it back to the faeries... She stole, it's their property? I understand her motivation, I understand the faeries motivation... I don't understand why the police would try to keep the object from the faeries. Now if the artifact could be used by the faeries to release thRead more
Why don’t the police just give it back to the faeries… She stole, it’s their property?
I understand her motivation,
I understand the faeries motivation…
I don’t understand why the police would try to keep the object from the faeries.
Now if the artifact could be used by the faeries to release the dragons who have been hibernating for an eon, and their release would bring back magic and destroy what we call technology; thus ending the age of man end bringing back the age of the fae… then I could understand why the police, or a specific heroic officer might be reluctant to give it over.
See lessAfter a police station is attacked, a supernatural mercenary in custody must work with mundane cops to defend it from a group of faeries seeking the powerful artifact she stole.
Not bad, it does need some streamlining, however before that, what do the faeries want with the artifact and why is it important to keep it safe from them? Adding that element to the logline, while streamlining it a bit will improve the logline greatly.
Not bad, it does need some streamlining, however before that, what do the faeries want with the artifact and why is it important to keep it safe from them? Adding that element to the logline, while streamlining it a bit will improve the logline greatly.
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You seemed to have placed the inciting incident at the end of your logline. When she discovers her magazine is secretly controlled by notorious inmate, a newly hired editor must... (Do this) if she is to (Stop this)
You seemed to have placed the inciting incident at the end of your logline.
When she discovers her magazine is secretly controlled by notorious inmate, a newly hired editor must… (Do this) if she is to (Stop this)
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