1. Posted: August 4, 2017In:

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    Richiev Singularity

    "When a time loop turns a famous opera singer into a convict... He must go back in time and teach a blind girl the piano if he is to return the time line to it's proper alignment and become a famous singer again"

    “When a time loop turns a famous opera singer into a convict… He must go back in time and teach a blind girl the piano if he is to return the time line to it’s proper alignment and become a famous singer again”

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  2. Posted: August 4, 2017In:

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    Richiev Singularity

    You probably need to add the connection between him and the old west blind girl to the logline, so we can see why he needs to teach her piano.

    You probably need to add the connection between him and the old west blind girl to the logline, so we can see why he needs to teach her piano.

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  3. Posted: August 4, 2017In:

    Terrified of his parents suspicions, a freshly outed gay high school senior must get a girlfriend so his parents will think he is straight.

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    Richiev Singularity

    I think a comical bit you could add to the story would be; even though his parents are traditional Christians who believe homosexuality is a sin... They are completely oblivious to who is gay,His mom has every Liberace album, "He is such a wonderful piano player, and so flamboyant, I just love his cRead more

    I think a comical bit you could add to the story would be; even though his parents are traditional Christians who believe homosexuality is a sin… They are completely oblivious to who is gay,

    His mom has every Liberace album, “He is such a wonderful piano player, and so flamboyant, I just love his costumes.” “He’s gay mom” “I know he must be a very happy fellow” “No I mean he’s gay” “Oh don’t be silly”

    Maybe he and his friend have a ‘sleepover’ and his mom catches them ‘wrestling’ in bed. “Oh boys will be boys, now time for sleep, you boys need to get your rest if you are to go to the YMCA tomorrow”

    DPG is right though, you do need an antagonist.

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