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THOUGHT: What I like about my brief time on this site so far…
Another thing about this site, it is both critical and encouraging. You will get good critical feedback on a logline but very little negativity.
Another thing about this site, it is both critical and encouraging.
You will get good critical feedback on a logline but very little negativity.
See lessA father, convinced his young daughter has inherited his terrifying ability to commune with evil spirits, must find the man who disabled his ability, to reawaken it.
One question, if there is a man who disabled his ability... wouldn't the goal be to find the man and have him disable the ability in the lead's daughter? What is the purpose is of reawakening his ability, instead of disabling the ability in his daughter, that isn't clear from the way your logline isRead more
One question, if there is a man who disabled his ability… wouldn’t the goal be to find the man and have him disable the ability in the lead’s daughter?
What is the purpose is of reawakening his ability, instead of disabling the ability in his daughter, that isn’t clear from the way your logline is worded.
See lessAfter an elaborate conspiracy conducted to lure him in, a retrenched detective discovers a cult that promises him riches but the cult has more in store for him than what he bargained for. OR A desperate ex-cop joins a cult in order to save his family but the cult kidnaps his daughter for ‘slaughter’. He has to save her even if it means losing his own life.
"When an Armageddon cult that worships?Moloch kidnaps his daughter, a retired detective with a certain skill set must traverse the dark world of Neo-Paganism in order to save his daughter from being sacrificed to the fire god."
“When an Armageddon cult that worships?Moloch kidnaps his daughter, a retired detective with a certain skill set must traverse the dark world of Neo-Paganism in order to save his daughter from being sacrificed to the fire god.”
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