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After a near drowning awakens an ability to commune with evil spirits, (12) a cowardly teenager must struggle to resist when a bushfire causes unbearably hot summer nights. (27)
I think the drowning can be done away with in the logline.
I think the drowning can be done away with in the logline.
See lessA loud-mouthed pizza delivery driver is pursued by the Italian Mafia when he steals their cash to impress his arrogant friends. EDIT: A loud-mouthed pizza delivery driver is pursued by the Italian Mafia when he reveals that they run his pizzeria to impress his arrogant friends.
Since the lead character is in the wrong, is there a good reason in your story that we as the reader or audience would want the lead to succeed? A motivation you could add to your logline to improve it.
Since the lead character is in the wrong, is there a good reason in your story that we as the reader or audience would want the lead to succeed? A motivation you could add to your logline to improve it.
See lessSally Mitchell, after having a drunken one night stand with Chris Rogers, finds herself pregnant with twins. Sally and Chris move in together, , forcing their best friends and housemates Dean Smith and Melissa Pearce to do the same, resulting in four twenty somethings having to grow up faster than they wanted to.
BTW this may very well be a great story, but the logline itself spends way too much time telling us the set-up to the story but then tells us nothing about what the lead character's goal is, now that this event has happened, what must the lead character actually do.
BTW this may very well be a great story, but the logline itself spends way too much time telling us the set-up to the story but then tells us nothing about what the lead character’s goal is, now that this event has happened, what must the lead character actually do.
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