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Sally Mitchell, after having a drunken one night stand with Chris Rogers, finds herself pregnant with twins. Sally and Chris move in together, , forcing their best friends and housemates Dean Smith and Melissa Pearce to do the same, resulting in four twenty somethings having to grow up faster than they wanted to.
I agree with the statements above, This is a situation, not a story. The story would be what they do about it.
I agree with the statements above,
This is a situation, not a story. The story would be what they do about it.
See lessAfter dying, Psychiatrist Ray Sandler and his secretary Caroline Neuwirth discover that they have gone to Hell and not Heaven. But there is hope in the form of Ben, a demon who offers both Ray and Caroline a chance to return to Earth, but at a cost. They must agree to get souls for Hell.
I am not sure why we would root for these characters. If you are going to have a lead character do something really bad... then they must have a strong goal they desire to accomplish even more. For instance if the lead character agreed to get 10 souls, in exchange for his wife's (Who he loves more tRead more
I am not sure why we would root for these characters.
If you are going to have a lead character do something really bad… then they must have a strong goal they desire to accomplish even more.
For instance if the lead character agreed to get 10 souls, in exchange for his wife’s (Who he loves more than anything) release from hell, then we could pull for the lead character, because even though he is doing a terrible thing, he is doing it for a noble purpose.
See lessAn immature government programmer’s promotion is denied by his overbearing boss, so he resorts to childish pranks with his beleaguered coworkers in the hope he’ll get transferred.
"They must fight dirty to keep their jobs..." is a bit clunky. I would start by changing that section of the logline.
“They must fight dirty to keep their jobs…” is a bit clunky. I would start by changing that section of the logline.
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