1. Posted: July 14, 2017In:

    Set in a near future where teacher’s carry firearms, a divorced high school educator shoots her least favorite student when he breaks her young daughter’s heart. (Negligent Discharge)

    Richiev Singularity

    Is the teacher the lead character? Also; does the story begin with the shooting, and the story is about what happens after, or does the shooting happen at the end of the story?

    Is the teacher the lead character?

    Also; does the story begin with the shooting, and the story is about what happens after, or does the shooting happen at the end of the story?

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  2. Posted: July 14, 2017In:

    A young and lonely businessman wants to find true happiness in order to give his life more purpose and standing in his way is only himself.

    Richiev Singularity

    You need to give the lead character an interesting tangible goal. The lead character needs to do something, and that something will be the hook of your story.-------------------------- "Looking for love, a desperate businessman joins a support group for loved ones of cancer victims, but when he fallRead more

    You need to give the lead character an interesting tangible goal.
    The lead character needs to do something, and that something will be the hook of your story.

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    “Looking for love, a desperate businessman joins a support group for loved ones of cancer victims, but when he falls in love he must keep secret the fact his daughter never had cancer and is still alive.”
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  3. Posted: July 11, 2017In:

    Confined to her apt complex during a CDC quarentine Briona must find a way for her father and her lovers not to kill each other.

    Richiev Singularity

    I am not sure I get this story. What does the lead character actually want? Why are we rooting for the lead character to succeed?

    I am not sure I get this story.

    What does the lead character actually want? Why are we rooting for the lead character to succeed?

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