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Spiralling amidst a divorce and losing custody of his daughter, a man takes a dangerous job shutting down an oil refinery with a band of salt-of-the-Earth co-workers.
You should make the goal more clear in the logline. (Not too big of a criticism) Also, the logline itself does not give off an 'Old School vibe. So you might want to add something that implies comedy in the logline. Perhaps, instead of salt-of-the-earth, you could describe the ragtag group of refineRead more
You should make the goal more clear in the logline. (Not too big of a criticism)
Also, the logline itself does not give off an ‘Old School vibe. So you might want to add something that implies comedy in the logline.
Perhaps, instead of salt-of-the-earth, you could describe the ragtag group of refinery workers as oddball or quirky.
However, think minor changes, I believe the logline itself is almost there.
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Okay, that sounds interesting.
Okay, that sounds interesting.
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We have a lead character. Good What is the lead character's goal... Not sure from this logline. What is standing in the way of the lead's goal? These are essential to a logline
We have a lead character. Good
What is the lead character’s goal… Not sure from this logline.
What is standing in the way of the lead’s goal?
These are essential to a logline
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