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When teenage angst goes south…an unofficial FB reunion 7 years later squares the circle but not in a nice way – MIDNITE SUN
Who is the lead character? What is their goal? What is standing in their way? (By that I mean those three things should be in your logline)
Who is the lead character?
What is their goal?
What is standing in their way?
(By that I mean those three things should be in your logline)
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You have two inciting incidents... that is one inciting incident too many. When a 21-year-old delves into the world of mathematics, he uncovers a profound cosmic connection that resonates throughout the universe. (There is no conflict) When a 21-year-old encounters an actress chosen by a wealthy entRead more
You have two inciting incidents… that is one inciting incident too many.
When a 21-year-old delves into the world of mathematics, he uncovers a profound cosmic connection that resonates throughout the universe. (There is no conflict)
When a 21-year-old encounters an actress chosen by a wealthy entrepreneur to replace his missing daughter, who happens to be the young man’s lost love, he must… (Then tell us what he must do)
I would choose one of these stories to concentrate on for the logline. That doesn’t mean both stories won’t be in the finished script, it just means for the logline you should tell the ‘main’ story.
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"A police officer betrays his vows and code of ethics to hide what he believes is evidence his daughter committed a murder." However, you might need to put a face to the conflict. "A police officer betrays his vows and code of ethics to hide what he believes is evidence his daughter committed a murdRead more
“A police officer betrays his vows and code of ethics to hide what he believes is evidence his daughter committed a murder.”
However, you might need to put a face to the conflict.
“A police officer betrays his vows and code of ethics to hide what he believes is evidence his daughter committed a murder, from a persistent internal affairs officer.”
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