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  1. Posted: June 29, 2023In: Thriller

    An Indigenous detective faces off with the unwritten law of nature an eye for an eye. He must immerse in a world of life and death before the hunters become the hunted.

    Richiev Singularity
    Replied to answer on June 30, 2023 at 9:04 pm

    That is actually better.

    That is actually better.

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  2. Posted: June 25, 2023In: Short Film

    When a lonely young man goes on a date to find love he instead finds himself in a life or death game of mini golf where a hole in one is his only option to survive.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 29, 2023 at 10:25 pm

    Interesting. While I am not completely sold on this, I have never seen this particular story idea before so I believe that is a major plus. Definitely, something to pursue.

    Interesting.
    While I am not completely sold on this, I have never seen this particular story idea before so I believe that is a major plus.
    Definitely, something to pursue.

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  3. Posted: June 29, 2023In: Thriller

    An Indigenous detective faces off with the unwritten law of nature an eye for an eye. He must immerse in a world of life and death before the hunters become the hunted.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 29, 2023 at 10:20 pm

    After reading your logline, I am unsure what the story is about. You should try writing a second logline using completely different words to tell the story differently. That does not mean your story isn't good, it just means the logline is a tiny bit vague.

    After reading your logline, I am unsure what the story is about.
    You should try writing a second logline using completely different words to tell the story differently.

    That does not mean your story isn’t good, it just means the logline is a tiny bit vague.

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