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    After The murder of there friend, a group of inner-city teens vows revenge by killing every cop in California.

    Richiev Singularity

    What compels the reader to want the lead characters to succeed? I could see if the leads went after the specific police officer but to kill every cop in California, both men, and women, Black, Asian, White, young, old, even those who have dedicated their lives to helping others? At some point won'tRead more

    What compels the reader to want the lead characters to succeed?

    I could see if the leads went after the specific police officer but to kill every cop in California, both men, and women, Black, Asian, White, young, old, even those who have dedicated their lives to helping others?

    At some point won’t people tune out?

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  2. Posted: October 8, 2021In:

    In the year 2112, Tom Sawyer discovers a guitar, forbidden by The Priests of Syrinx. Embracing The Spirit of Radio, Tom wants to express his Freewill through music. Forced to Fly By Night, he uncovers a secret Closer to the Heart that threatens the governing technocracy.

    Richiev Singularity

    I wish I could edit. I said ABBA treatment but I think perhaps more along the lines of "Heavy Metal" (The animated movie) to Rush songs.

    I wish I could edit.

    I said ABBA treatment but I think perhaps more along the lines of “Heavy Metal” (The animated movie) to Rush songs.

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  3. Posted: October 8, 2021In:

    In the year 2112, Tom Sawyer discovers a guitar, forbidden by The Priests of Syrinx. Embracing The Spirit of Radio, Tom wants to express his Freewill through music. Forced to Fly By Night, he uncovers a secret Closer to the Heart that threatens the governing technocracy.

    Richiev Singularity

    This might work. It obviously isn't a normal logline but I do see where you are going. Doing the ABBA treatment to Rush

    This might work. It obviously isn’t a normal logline but I do see where you are going.

    Doing the ABBA treatment to Rush

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