1. Posted: June 24, 2017In:

    After saving an mistreated puppy, a young doctor sets out forming new friendships, helping those in need.

    Richiev Singularity

    Story is conflict. Is there a main conflict in your story that you could present in your logline?

    Story is conflict.

    Is there a main conflict in your story that you could present in your logline?

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  2. Posted: June 24, 2017In:

    Down an english mine, an unexpected explosion damages David’s chance of earning a decent living, thus sending ripples through the Cornish village.

    Richiev Singularity

    You need a lead character

    You need a lead character

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  3. Posted: June 23, 2017In:

    When a young Latina, Izel Madrid, finds out she descends from Aztec gods, she decides to join forces with the charmingly surly, shapeshifting detective, Elias Navarro, in order to fight supernatural crime and find out the truth about her lineage.

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    Richiev Singularity

    A quick note you say: "she decides to join forces with..." should say: "she joins forces with..." You don't need to tells us what she decides, just what she does. Anyway just a little thing.

    A quick note

    you say: “she decides to join forces with…”
    should say: “she joins forces with…”

    You don’t need to tells us what she decides, just what she does.

    Anyway just a little thing.

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