1. Posted: July 1, 2017In:

    When severe brain trauma hallucination escalates to a pain crippling, suicidal head, a memory broke teen who wants to live, must imagine a super programmer who integrates a virtual reality to recovery

    Richiev Singularity

    I agree with Nir and dkp: Who is the lead? What do they want, and what is standing in their way?

    I agree with Nir and dkp:
    Who is the lead? What do they want, and what is standing in their way?

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  2. Posted: June 29, 2017In:

    After the death of a longtime friend, a man’s forgotten imagination is rekindled by his daughter.

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    Richiev Singularity

    For clarity, is the daughter, the lead characters daughter, or is it the daughter of the friend, because it can be read both ways?

    For clarity, is the daughter, the lead characters daughter, or is it the daughter of the friend, because it can be read both ways?

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  3. Posted: June 27, 2017In:

    After discovering he is not the sole orphaned victim of an inhuman creature that took his parents years ago, a college student must piece together how the orphans are connected before the creature strikes again.

    Richiev Singularity

    by nature a creature (In this context) is not human, so ?you don't need to tell us creature is inhuman. ----- "Orphaned as a kid, a college student teams with several other orphan victims to hunt down the creature?that killed their parents and destroy it."

    by nature a creature (In this context) is not human, so ?you don’t need to tell us creature is inhuman.
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    “Orphaned as a kid, a college student teams with several other orphan victims to hunt down the creature?that killed their parents and destroy it.”

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