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  1. Posted: June 27, 2017In: Action

    A daughter struggling to come to terms with her Father’s death discovers a dangerous secret. Attracting the attention of government, and forcing her family to flee the country.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 27, 2017 at 3:22 pm

    If the secret is what set's the story in motion, you should say what it is in the logline for clarity. ----- "When she discovers her deceased father had a double life as a spy, a grieving accountant must flee England with the government only steps behind if she is to ?reunited with her Russian homelRead more

    If the secret is what set’s the story in motion, you should say what it is in the logline for clarity.
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    “When she discovers her deceased father had a double life as a spy, a grieving accountant must flee England with the government only steps behind if she is to ?reunited with her Russian homeland.”

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  2. Posted: June 27, 2017In: War

    Three genetically engineered soldiers must face discrimination as they struggle to find the kidnapped members of their squad.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 27, 2017 at 3:17 pm

    The obstacle of a story or logline should match the goal. If the object of the soldiers was to "gain equality," then facing discrimination would be a great obstacle. But I don't see how it relates to finding their kidnapped members. ----- "When several squad members are kidnapped, a genetically engiRead more

    The obstacle of a story or logline should match the goal.

    If the object of the soldiers was to “gain equality,” then facing discrimination would be a great obstacle.

    But I don’t see how it relates to finding their kidnapped members.
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    “When several squad members are kidnapped, a genetically engineered soldier, must infiltrate a highly guarded, ?genetic-purity compound to save the captured members.”
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  3. Posted: June 24, 2017In: Drama

    A recently deceased woman works as a bartender at a Waystation between life and death, helping lost souls confront their very real demons and earning a chance to return to Life – and the woman she loves.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 25, 2017 at 12:26 pm

    This could actually work as a TV show.

    This could actually work as a TV show.

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