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Vowlence Rewrite: After falling for another woman and in love with having choice, a rogue “constructed” husband must battle his original creator and society’s hell-bent effort to maintain matrimony’s perfect success rate, in his driven pursuit of true love.
on your previous post, I mentioned the 'scarlet letter'However I actually think this would be great as a re-imagining of the story of "Lilith" Lilith is folklore written somewhere around the 7th to 10th century AD In the story God creates a wife for Adam but she refuses to submit so she runs away. IRead more
on your previous post, I mentioned the ‘scarlet letter’
However I actually think this would be great as a re-imagining of the story of “Lilith”
Lilith is folklore written somewhere around the 7th to 10th century AD
In the story God creates a wife for Adam but she refuses to submit so she runs away.
I think using Lilith as the back drop for the science fiction story could work:
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2100 AD
1: The City of Eden is a utopia (If you are wealthy)
2: Spouses are genetically created for the wealthy (And sometimes disposed of when they want a new model)?
3: Lilith is created to be the perfect wife for Adam
4: She is basically to be a domestic slave.
5: She runs away, but is captured by the Angels (The City of Eden’s law enforcement)
6: But she falls for one of the officers (Officer Gabriel)
7: Gabriel is being transferred away from Eden to the city of New Babylon?
8: Because she has run away she is in danger of being disposed of for her deficiency
9: Now she has one chance, to escape to New Babylon: She flees the disposal unit.
10: Adam is angry, Jealous and determined to get her back, even if just to punish her.
11: She discovers an underground railroad of sorts. Turns out she wasn’t the first to rebel against her fate
12: However just as she is to escape the Angels appear. The underground sacrifice themselves in battle to help Lilith escape.
13: From there she flees to New Babylon with her pursuers always at her heel.
? ? ? ? ?(It would help at this point if she had a companion)
14: Once in New Babylon she reunites with Gabriel. But Eden wants her back and threaten New Babylon.
15: The leadership of New Babylon agree to hand her over.
16: But many residents in New Babylon are synths.
17: They rebel
18: There is a huge battle and New Babylon falls to the Rebels and Lilith is safe.
19: Gabriel and Lilith kiss
fade to black
Begin writing the sequel.
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Hope that helped, good luck
Vowlence- In the year 2050, matrimony’s perfect success rate is challenged when a “created” spouse falls for someone other than her creator and falls in love with having a choice.
This could work, a science fiction version of, "The Scarlet Letter" It would help, as pointed out above, if the lead had a goal.
This could work, a science fiction version of, “The Scarlet Letter”
It would help, as pointed out above, if the lead had a goal.
See lessAll the King’s Women- When they become fed up with being one of the king’s many “fair maidens”, three wenches conspire to kill him, but when the queen dies and the king announces his plan to remarry, the three turn on each other as they vie to be the next lady of royalty.
dpg beat me to it :) I would go with his logline example, says the same thing with less words
dpg beat me to it 🙂 I would go with his logline example, says the same thing with less words
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