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  1. Posted: June 18, 2017In: Fantasy

    After mystical criminals break a powerful witch out of prison, a wizard a part of a magic police force must lead her first mission to catch them.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 21, 2017 at 12:06 pm

    You should make it personal "When the witch who killed her family escapes from prison, a determined mage-hunter comes out of retirement to take down the bitch." (I know 'bitch' probably doesn't work)

    You should make it personal

    “When the witch who killed her family escapes from prison, a determined mage-hunter comes out of retirement to take down the bitch.” (I know ‘bitch’ probably doesn’t work)

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  2. Posted: June 19, 2017In: Drama

    When a neglected housewife discovers that the nest will be empty sooner than she had planned, she follows her daughter to the beach for the summer in an effort to save their last few months together, quickly realizing she has a lot to learn about their relationship, her marriage and herself.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 21, 2017 at 11:59 am

    When her daughter is accepted to a college across the country, a soon-to-be empty nest housewife follows her daughter to Fort Lauderdale to have one last bonding experience.

    When her daughter is accepted to a college across the country, a soon-to-be empty nest housewife follows her daughter to Fort Lauderdale to have one last bonding experience.

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  3. Posted: June 21, 2017In: Drama

    Seduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.

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    Added an answer on June 21, 2017 at 11:55 am

    This logline needs that one extra thing.Is there something in your script that stands out?because the naive girl who goes to Hollywood and get's hooked on drugs and sex has been done. As a result your logline you need something that makes your story stand out from the rest.Not saying this isn't a grRead more

    This logline needs that one extra thing.

    Is there something in your script that stands out?

    because the naive girl who goes to Hollywood and get’s hooked on drugs and sex has been done.
    As a result your logline you need something that makes your story stand out from the rest.

    Not saying this isn’t a great premise. just that you need something in ?your logline to grab the reader.

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