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A troubled South African teenager learns the true meaning of prayer when he confronts a TOKOLOSHE. (16)
When a tokoloshe evil spirit attacks his village a South African teen must (do this thing) to defeat the creature.
When a tokoloshe evil spirit attacks his village a South African teen must (do this thing) to defeat the creature.
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This is starting to shape up. I would try to add a more specific goal, are they on the run from the brother (Or fiance' from past loglines) and must reach a certain place? Are they trapped by the Antagonist in an enclosed space and must escape?So, an improvement, now I would just clarify a little biRead more
This is starting to shape up. I would try to add a more specific goal, are they on the run from the brother (Or fiance’ from past loglines) and must reach a certain place? Are they trapped by the Antagonist in an enclosed space and must escape?
So, an improvement, now I would just clarify a little bit more on ‘what’ they must do.
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A logline should be written from one point of view.Your logline begins from the point of view of the War Hero, and we think, he is the lead character Then it switches perspectives and now the lead has shifted to the Silo Commander/SpyThis confuses the reader because we don't know who the lead is froRead more
A logline should be written from one point of view.
Your logline begins from the point of view of the War Hero, and we think, he is the lead character
Then it switches perspectives and now the lead has shifted to the Silo Commander/Spy
This confuses the reader because we don’t know who the lead is from reading your logline.
I would pick one character to be the lead then write the logline from their perspective for the sake of clarity.
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