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A hardcore gamer learns from mysterious rebels about the true nature of his horrific childhood and his role in the formation of a new age of enlightenment.
In your first logline, there was no conflict. Conflict is when a character has a goal, and something stands in the way of that goal. In this logline you have given us a situation; But you haven't given the lead character a goal Because there is no goal, there is no conflict. What is the lead charactRead more
In your first logline, there was no conflict.
Conflict is when a character has a goal, and something stands in the way of that goal.
In this logline you have given us a situation; But you haven’t given the lead character a goal
Because there is no goal, there is no conflict.
What is the lead characters specific goal?
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A hardcore gamer meets the girl of his dreams who just so happens to hold the key to his inexplicable fear of the dark.
The lead meets the girl of his dreams. Great She holds the key to his fear of the dark. Even better The end. Sounds perfect... no conflict whatsoever; except that story is conflict.
The lead meets the girl of his dreams. Great
She holds the key to his fear of the dark. Even better
The end.
Sounds perfect… no conflict whatsoever; except that story is conflict.
See lessAfter his son is shot in a drive-by, a gangster must use his crippled werewolf abilities to kill the vengeful vampire who has been attacking his gang.
Is the gangster crippled, or are his abilities crippled?
Is the gangster crippled, or are his abilities crippled?
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