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After his feminist wife comes in possession of a gun that belongs to the mafia , a timid man has to stop and fight the mafia that they are now running from, and save his failing marriage in the process.
Why doesn't he find the weapon?
Why doesn’t he find the weapon?
See lessTo fulfill a family vendetta a lone warrior must transform a helpless and divided faction into a superior force in order to end an aged war.
One more thing, I noticed the bad guy is a warlord named?Shatterros. I would mention the warlord leader (You don't necessarily have to name him) in your logline. It is always good to put a face on the opposition.When his peaceful tribe is destroyed by an evil warlord When his tribe is destroyed by aRead more
One more thing, I noticed the bad guy is a warlord named?Shatterros. I would mention the warlord leader (You don’t necessarily have to name him) in your logline. It is always good to put a face on the opposition.
When his peaceful tribe is destroyed by an evil warlord
When his tribe is destroyed by an evil Warlord named Shatterros,
Hope that helped.
See lessTo fulfill a family vendetta a lone warrior must transform a helpless and divided faction into a superior force in order to end an aged war.
There is a lot of intro to your story. Have you thought of consolidating it?The first action takes place 15 years in the past, then the second action takes place in the present. If you were to consolidate you might be able to get to the game play faster.His tribe is slaughtered, he is the only surviRead more
There is a lot of intro to your story. Have you thought of consolidating it?
The first action takes place 15 years in the past, then the second action takes place in the present.
If you were to consolidate you might be able to get to the game play faster.
His tribe is slaughtered, he is the only survivor, now as an inexperienced warrior (He will start low and level up) He is determined to unite the tribe of Aragon so they don’t suffer the same fate as his tribe:
Action begins.
Anyway I am glad to see you have this thought out, If you feel strongly about the long version of the opening just be prepared, many gamers want to get straight to the action.
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