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In the final stages of war between three factions, an incredible warrior and huntsman is called upon to secure, protect and adapt a defenseless faction called Avagon in return to fulfill a lifelong family vendetta. If anyone would be so kind as to give me a straight, honest opinion on this concept for my 3rd year game project. Thank you!
If this is for a game, the logline will change whether the player can only play from the point of view of one faction or whether they have the ability to play all three faction.
If this is for a game, the logline will change whether the player can only play from the point of view of one faction or whether they have the ability to play all three faction.
See lessWhen several soldiers mysteriously die during training, a young soldier learns that his supervisor is responsible for the deaths and must fight to prevent future deaths.
1: I believe what sets the story in motion is the discovery that his supervisor is responsible for the training deaths2: You should personalize the death, make the victim someone he knows3: You should define what you mean by 'fight' after all they are soldiers, does that mean a gun battle, a court bRead more
1: I believe what sets the story in motion is the discovery that his supervisor is responsible for the training deaths
2: You should personalize the death, make the victim someone he knows
3: You should define what you mean by ‘fight’ after all they are soldiers, does that mean a gun battle, a court battle? What kind of fight are you talking about. Be specific.
Here would be an example of adding those elements: (Yours would be different of course)
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“When he discovers?his supervisor is responsible for the training death of his best friend, a loyal soldier must take on his malicious Gunny Sargent in a one on one battle to the death.”
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250 Years into the future, the US and others have shied more and more from democracy. A Young Man working for NASA is chosen to be part of a team mission to explore a new planet found far away that could potentially be a new home for humans, away from corrupt governments and war. The discoveries he and his team make will change them forever.
I guess we would should start from the basics, Who is the lead character and what do they want?
I guess we would should start from the basics, Who is the lead character and what do they want?
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