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A college student falls in his love with teenage babysitter only to find out he’s dating her cousin.
What is stopping the lead character from breaking up with his current girlfriend, so he can be with the girl he loves. (I mean it should be both clear and in the logline) Because the thing that is keeping the lead character from being with the woman he loves is the central conflict of the story. TheRead more
What is stopping the lead character from breaking up with his current girlfriend, so he can be with the girl he loves. (I mean it should be both clear and in the logline)
Because the thing that is keeping the lead character from being with the woman he loves is the central conflict of the story.
The lead wants to be with his former babysitter (but this specific thing is standing in his way)
See lessAt a truck stop in Arkansas, a retired alcoholic cop turned paranormal investigator on a quest to reunite with his deceased son warns a brother and sister not to check into the Hardin Hill Bed and Breakfast.
I think as a starting point for the logline, I am not sure if the cop is the lead character or the young couple. You say you are going to start off with a death, I assume the cop's son. But then the police officer warns the young couple about staying in the hotel. Usually, the warning comes to the lRead more
I think as a starting point for the logline, I am not sure if the cop is the lead character or the young couple.
You say you are going to start off with a death, I assume the cop’s son.
But then the police officer warns the young couple about staying in the hotel. Usually, the warning comes to the lead character/s. Since they are the ones being warned it seems like they might be the lead characters.
So definitely a little confusing and obviously because you also seem to want to start the story off with a misdirect, that will make the logline a little bit tricky to write as well.
See lessAt a truck stop in Arkansas, a retired alcoholic cop turned paranormal investigator on a quest to reunite with his deceased son warns a brother and sister not to check into the Hardin Hill Bed and Breakfast.
This is a scene not a story. A Story: Lead character Something happens to them This creates a goal Something stands in the way of that goal Who is the lead character? What do they want? What is standing in their way?
This is a scene not a story.
A Story:
Lead character
Something happens to them
This creates a goal
Something stands in the way of that goal
Who is the lead character?
See lessWhat do they want?
What is standing in their way?